Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Poet Pleiades

Loneliness - Pleiades

Long cold winters alone,
Lacking someone to share,
Love pets, limit grief known,
Live for others to care,
Looking for a soulmate,
Left out, seems too unfair,
Limping life’s path so late.

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Mark Martin April 27, 2017 at 2:45 PM Sad, lonely poetry, well written. Congratulations on your win Cecelia! :-)

Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 7:34 PM Nicely written , Cecelia, congratulations on your win. ~*

Joanna Daniel April 19, 2017 at 9:48 AM Profound Sadness expressed lyrically:) congratulations, Cecelia:)

Kim Merryman April 18, 2017 at 10:40 PM Cecelia, this was so sad. Great depiction of loneliness! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Roy Pett April 18, 2017 at 4:37 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Cecelia, great Pleiades. :))

Agnes Krampe April 18, 2017 at 7:18 AM Great job depicting sadness in so few lines, congrats on your win, Cecelia.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2017 at 1:46 AM - Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Cecelia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White April 17, 2017 at 2:04 AM I absolutely love your Pleiades, they flow very naturally and to me this is VERY good. I wish you good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison April 16, 2017 at 3:32 PM Every line portrays intense loneliness:-( Very well penned Cecilia good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green April 14, 2017 at 4:01 PM This is so sad Cecelia but very nicely written because the emotions are easily felt in your words. If this is for a contest, I wish you well my friend. Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer April 14, 2017 at 5:07 PM Thank you Chris. Yes, it is for a contest, I find the contests are good discipline, challenging me to use forms I would not use otherwise. Only a strong emotion would do for this form!