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Loneliness Personification

Once the sun goes down for the evening
The trees limbs are dripping with sadness.
Then she sighs silently, "I am flourishing."

The dress she is donning is sky blue.
The dress flows deftly same as a hummingbird.
Retaining the floors motionlessness glue.

Virtual realm dulled by the seducers hand.
My draining bleakness swallowed me.
Almost perfectly and invisibly crippled.

I was shrouded in a dreamy burst of calmness.
I also hope to find the love she once had.
She sleeps on a soft purplish mattress.

Another of her caresses sent an electric pulse.
My back was overly halcyon with her spa.
I was enjoying her voice on her soul chords. 


First Place Contest Winner

Written: May 23, 2021

All Yours (Jun 3) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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David Kavanagh May 24, 2021 at 1:52 PM Now here is a poets gift, bringing nature to life, captivating in imagery, personification indeed Lasaad, ‘retaining the floors motionless glue’ jumps off the page, fantastic words, yet your poem remains fluidic as if responsive to the touch, skilful penning, cheers David Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 2:42 PM David, your gratitude fills me with pride and pleasure. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the scenes created here, dear friend; your excellent comments brought a lot of joy to my heart. It's significantly kind of you to stop by and comment so thoughtfully.

Christuraj Alex May 24, 2021 at 12:06 PM It's a beautiful Personification. Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 12:19 PM Thanks, Alex, appreciate your feedback

Demetrios Trifiatis May 24, 2021 at 6:30 AM Your pen has become a pallet that helped you paint an impressive portrait of nature, my dear friend, Lasaad. Good luck. Blessings! Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 7:37 AM Thank you so much, dear friend, Demetrios, your input is essential to enhance your writing, and I appreciate your kindness.

Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 4:50 AM Adorable images of sunset--comforting sounds of nature soothing loneliness. I feel the dreamy calmness, Lasaad. Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 7:47 AM It means a lot that you thought it was motivating, and thank you so much Vijay

Sara Kendrick May 24, 2021 at 4:46 AM The ocean turned into romance. Enjoyed reading your personification. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for all your visits to my page. Sara Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thanks for your visit, Sara, your kind words, so much appreciate, and I'm happy you like my write

Victor Buhagiar May 24, 2021 at 2:16 AM Quite a romantic personification. Best for a win. Sotto Poet May 24, 2021 at 7:50 AM Thanks, dear Victor, your kind words are so much appreciated.