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Once the sun goes down for the evening The trees limbs are dripping with sadness. Then she sighs silently, "I am flourishing." The dress she is donning is sky blue. The dress flows deftly same as a hummingbird. Retaining the floors motionlessness glue. Virtual realm dulled by the seducers hand. My draining bleakness swallowed me. Almost perfectly and invisibly crippled. I was shrouded in a dreamy burst of calmness. I also hope to find the love she once had. She sleeps on a soft purplish mattress. Another of her caresses sent an electric pulse. My back was overly halcyon with her spa. I was enjoying her voice on her soul chords.
First Place Contest Winner Written: May 23, 2021 All Yours (Jun 3) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 5/24/2021 1:52:00 PM
Now here is a poets gift, bringing nature to life, captivating in imagery, personification indeed Lasaad, ‘retaining the floors motionless glue’ jumps off the page, fantastic words, yet your poem remains fluidic as if responsive to the touch, skilful penning, cheers David
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:42:00 PM
David, your gratitude fills me with pride and pleasure. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the scenes created here, dear friend; your excellent comments brought a lot of joy to my heart. It's significantly kind of you to stop by and comment so thoughtfully.
Date: 5/24/2021 12:06:00 PM
It's a beautiful Personification.
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Date: 5/24/2021 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Alex, appreciate your feedback
Date: 5/24/2021 6:30:00 AM
Your pen has become a pallet that helped you paint an impressive portrait of nature, my dear friend, Lasaad. Good luck. Blessings!
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Date: 5/24/2021 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend, Demetrios, your input is essential to enhance your writing, and I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 5/24/2021 4:50:00 AM
Adorable images of sunset--comforting sounds of nature soothing loneliness. I feel the dreamy calmness, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/24/2021 7:47:00 AM
It means a lot that you thought it was motivating, and thank you so much Vijay
Date: 5/24/2021 4:46:00 AM
The ocean turned into romance. Enjoyed reading your personification. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for all your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/24/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Sara, your kind words, so much appreciate, and I'm happy you like my write
Date: 5/24/2021 2:16:00 AM
Quite a romantic personification. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/24/2021 7:50:00 AM
Thanks, dear Victor, your kind words are so much appreciated.

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