Loneliness Knows Me By Name

A heart without a home
Can cause one much pain.
A mind on the troll
Can cause one much shame.

A life all alone
Feels like acid rain.

Loneliness knows me by name
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rodd Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 7:11 AM
This is beautifully poignant.
Promise Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:05 PM
In your Free Verse, you even threw in some rhymes. Great description of loneliness my friend. Cheers and best wishes.
Flannery Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:06 AM
So true Neil. Loneliness can be very defeating. But when we realize that Jesus is always by our side, lonliness has no place in our lives. Just in talking with Him our lonely hearts are warmed and filled with joy. His perfect love makes us complete.
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October 13, 2015 at 2:33 PM
WOW, Neil you sure know how to pull your reader in. I can't say I know this feeling. I'm sure I felt this burning sensation at least once or twice in my life. You did an amazing job, in describing how one is drawn into a world of loneliness when falling in despair. Love SKAT
Kruger Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Thank you SKAT. I wrote that during a tough old time. Funny how I only really write anything when something significant takes place in my life. Haven't written anything in a while. I suppose its what they call writer's block?
Kruger Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 1:23 PM
A   Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Hi Neil, I like the last seam, even though it is not a good attraction """to be known as""", I enjoyed the way you conjured to the calling of loneliness. This is a short poem, but worthy of another read. Always LINDA
Kruger Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Linda. I commented earlier that I don't usually write soppy poems, but seems like its working for me. At least for now.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:08 PM
- Loneliness is a sad word ...... - We all need each other - Loneliness is having someone to yearn for and share words and thoughts with - Great written, Neil ! - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kruger Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Aww did you post it yet? If yes, I'm going to read it now.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:42 PM
(I wrote: - A Lonely Path With You In Heart - after I read your poem today, Neil :))
Georgieva Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 9:48 AM
How beautifully writen! xxx
Kruger Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Thank you very much young lady
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