Loneliness

I thought I knew lonely, my friend
Cowboy'd for many years
Stayed in a line shack one whole winter
Brought out all the old fears

Rode drag on a drive to Denver
Lost in the mud and dust
Spoke not a word each lonely day
Talked at night 'cause I must

Spent a whole Spring trappin' beaver
Me and a tent was all
I talked a lot to dead beaver
Wished to hell it was Fall

So I've seen my share of lonely
What I thought it to be
But when that girl up and left me
A whole new world faced me

When those blue eyes lost their sparkle
I was amazed to see
That sparkle was what I lived for -
There's nothing else for me

Lonely is deep and wide and dark -
I didn't know, my friend
It's a hole that keeps all its light
I won't be back again


July 22, 2016
For Contest "Lonliness"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Congrats Larry, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Bradfield Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Thanks, Teddy! I appreciate the kind words!..Larry
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Some lonely times friend Larry, congratulations, deserving higher marks on my card...
Bradfield Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Thanks Charlie!!
Negron Flores Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Congratulations Larry on the placement of the contest
Bradfield Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thank you!!!..Larry
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