Frederic Parker Poet Rhyme

Loneliness

My soul and rain are one
lost in despair
like an empty cold street
made of cut stone
neither ever escapes
its solitaire
languishing in darkness
both are alone!

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8/18/15
Frederic Parker

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Skat A September 1, 2015 at 11:43 PM Frederic, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT

Paul Callus August 31, 2015 at 4:01 PM A very creative blending of these two pictures, Frederic. #7 Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 30, 2015 at 10:34 PM Very wonderful verse Frederic! Congrats on awesome win!

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2015 at 10:18 PM Frederic, I am impressed by the way you blended the images of the two pictures. GREAT thinking!!! Congrats on a well deserved win.

Constance La France August 20, 2015 at 9:58 AM Frederick, this very well penned, I did not need to see the images to see them. A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tangerine. . .