Loneliness

There is only a chair in this empty space
There is no-one in it,
It is barren and bare.
I am alone.
Should i sit
Will someone come if I sit.
I sit.
No-one comes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 13, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Judy,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Eastman Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Ahhh... We end the lonliness by going out and sharing... Well written. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry.
Mehta Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Short and sweet, but sums up the loneliness, Judy
Karim Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Nice. I know what loneliness is like and it is close to the way you wrote about loneliness.
Jamoner Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Nice write.. Better get another chair so that someone will come and sit beside u. ^^
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:16 PM
I will come and join you then you won't be lonely - great write - good luck if its for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:50 PM
I will come sit with you as well....Have a wonderful weekend...you are not alone....hugs Tim
Wood Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Tim. Have a good weekend too.
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:46 PM
may i sit with you, my friend?.. hope you got my soupie... endearing write!.. huggs
Wood Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Thanks. You may sit with me.
Wood Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:37 PM
I love this poem, it's beautiful and sad at the same time.very meaningful.
Wood Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Thanks. Glad you like it.
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