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Loneliness

A constant thought that enchants, Is you. An intense ache in my heart, Is you. Deep red that flows in my veins, Is you. An impulse that traverses down my nerves, Is you. A touch percieved as with closed eyes, Is you. I can hear your footsteps approach close to me, But as I open my eyes, I find , It's only me and my loneliness !! Written January 23rd, 2014 for contest by First place win Now Entered for contest 'Faces of Loneliness' by Frank Herrera

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/27/2014 10:01:00 AM

A very deep and emotional poem evoking many sentiments of feeling and pain..Excellently penned!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/27/2014 10:04:00 AM

Thanks for the like Charmaine !

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2014 2:41:00 PM

heartfelt write - congrats on your wins too

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/27/2014 12:28:00 AM

Thanks Jack !

Deepak Chalise

Date: 1/26/2014 6:17:00 AM

Who created us is very clever all strength he provides us. See in imagination there is everything when opend eys vanished the seen. Lovely poem I love it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/27/2014 12:27:00 AM

Thanks for the like !

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/25/2014 7:27:00 AM

A sad but lovely ghazal refrain like poem. Lonelines portrayd swell. Must b hard to b a doc n poetess eh. Congrats. Pls review my latest poem.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/27/2014 12:25:00 AM

Thanks Zaynub !

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/25/2014 6:38:00 AM

...and I can feel the loneliness of which you have written. Great job and congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/25/2014 6:41:00 AM

Dane thanks for stopping by !!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2014 2:16:00 PM

breathlessly poignant, r.upma.. cheers on your top win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/25/2014 6:41:00 AM

Thanks for visiting Nette !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2014 8:02:00 PM

Enjoyed the write on loneliness and congrats on the fine win, Dr. Upma

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/25/2014 8:41:00 AM

I am retired person since last 20 years and has all the time to read and comments. I relate how you can't. Namaste

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/25/2014 6:46:00 AM

Thanks Dr Ram ! I find you r very liberal with your comments ! Feel the guilt sometimes not being able to read most of the precious pieces , Coz the profession is demanding too ,,,sorry can't help it ..