Loneliness

I have erected too many statues in the name of love.
Not even they subdued!
Steadily, they tore themselves from their pedestals
and left...

There is no love!
God weeps in my heart...
Don’t cry, Father!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Shines Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 4:02 AM
nice poem
Anderson-Throop Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 3:58 PM
The longing portrayed is superb.
Gregory Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 12:09 PM
our expectations are enduring ... nice poem
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November 19, 2013 at 11:54 AM
Hello Ruxandra, wow... deeply beautiful and heart gropping... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 19, 2013 at 10:58 AM
† Abraham Laughed As, 'Our Father,' Told His Child That Sarai Would Concieve A Son ˜ Leah As Rachel Were Over Joyed When Their, 'Heavenly Father,' Opened Their Wombs ˜ Nebuchadnezzar, Turned His Opened Heart Unto, 'Eternal's Father,' Understanding All Things Beautiful And Beyound, Fall From 'His' Hands' * What Shall You Give To Me, When Everything Is Mine ˜ Riding Atop The Wings Of Her Wind: My Son *.* Daddyyyy ˜ I Wuv Wu. ˜ Smile, He's Got The Whole World In 'His Hands;' Don't Trip ˜ Love John
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