Loneliness

glassy-eyed people
moving as in a dream
looking without seeing
seeing without looking

utter hopelessness
pervading their insides
filling them with despair 
and pessimism

lustreless eyes
no inner joy
just a deep emptiness
stifling their souls

dried-up people
shutting others out
shutting themselves in
lost in their loneliness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Oh, oh how sad , but so true too. and the poem leaves not even a little bit of hope.
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:18 PM
John, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
Beharry Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Skat. Best wishes! Have a wonderful day!
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:20 PM
love the win John...PD
Beharry Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, PD. Have a great day!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, John! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Beharry Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Thank you, Rhonda. Have a charming day!
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, John
Beharry Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta. Have a pleasant day!
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 6:57 PM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
Beharry Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Have a nice day!
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Well said....congratulations on your winning poem....
Beharry Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Thank you, Donna. Have a delightful day!
Coleman Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 5:45 PM
uh uh i simply dont know what to say my friend what an exclusive and powerful peace you have created here.Grate work
Beharry Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 10:21 PM
Thank you for your comment, Michael. Best Regards!
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