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Loneliness

Is that what i feel when i am in company and still feel left out?
Is that when someone i loved walked out of my life?
Is it when my best friend and i fought and our friendship was quits?
i am still alone and searching for an inner meaning to loneliness
and the more i search i realise the lonelier i am

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/12/2016 9:31:00 PM

A poem I can relate too!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/2/2013 4:11:00 PM

I believe I know what you feel very strong write I enjoyed reading your wonderful piece! Congrats on your featured poem!!! Laura :)

Milton Toran

Date: 7/31/2013 2:34:00 PM

Truthful and honest. I respect that. Milt

John Ginesi

Date: 7/2/2013 8:04:00 AM

This is very short but tells me a lot about loneliness, it leaves a painful feeling in your heart, something we all have to deal with through life. I rated you high for this because I feel you have the gift of poetry in you like a passion. very well done. John

Skat A

Date: 6/23/2013 10:13:00 PM

Shreya, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2013 12:24:00 PM

a very sad way to feel... I hope you sort things out with your best friend, we are also here for you... thank you for sharing a part of you here,, even it is is the lonely, one... luv~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2013 12:22:00 PM

S Susan,, "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far.. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"