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Days turn to nights yet where are you my love Next to me you sit... You see not with your heart and you are deaf to my words Alone to waltz...Loneliness is my companion An impenetrable barricade stands between us separating our love Two roads assembled in your view One long road assures difficulty but in the trees buds bloom with promise of beauty and life The short road offers the concealment in the darkness, temptations, and sinful delights Blinded by enticement darkness over shadows the light Illness in our hearts demolish the goodness Loneliness saturates my most cherished desires Desires remain smothered in your hands Loneliness, release my soul My tattered heart can take no additional sorrow Love is but a false promise that tears into one’s being The fire that once kindled your soul for me is now but glaciers of ice clogging your veins Death is but a dream compared to the agony of exhausting your affection for me….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/13/2012 2:38:00 AM
Nice write Ana! Love your choice of theme. Loneliness can be suffocating especially when it happens despite being surrounded by people.
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Date: 9/6/2012 2:14:00 PM
Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Ana. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2012 10:27:00 AM
Ana, you have written a sad, but very well poem. - I like it a lot, well done. - Welcome you to the P-Soup - Hope you will enjoy yourself here, get ideas and write more and more. Reading other people's poems and comments. - Have fun with poems. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2012 9:52:00 AM
A passionate verse Anna. I so sorry for sadness. Do not define your worth by someone else.You are somebody! Peace and Love! Cynthia read poem "In Me! I wrote
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