Loneliness

I sit on my own, a cat on my knee, and wait for the 'phone - in case it's for me. ~
For David Williams 'Twenty (words)/Twenty (syllables)' Contest by Charles Clive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 30, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Charles, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
Anena Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 7:50 AM
you make poetry sound simple and easy to write yet again so very interesting
Bhandula Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 3:33 AM
ahh.. u have stolen my feeling... use to feel d same...
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Congrats on "Loneliness" being featured.
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March 4, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Congrats on your win, Charles! Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Congrats on your winning work..I hope that the call comes through..Sara
K. Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 11:14 AM
This was a really touching one, it made me want to say "Oh shucks" when I read it-- really enjoyed this-- great job you did here!
Taylor Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Congrats, Charles. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:48 PM
well, I LOVE this one, it's a bout a cat and it's very nicely rhymed. Congrats on the HM.
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Charles, well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:02 AM
congrats Charles on winning an HM for this unique write luv..
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:06 AM
i like this poem and would have place it higher in the contest. nice job!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations this is so sad love it xx
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Long Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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