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Loneliness

I sit on my own, a cat on my knee, and wait for the 'phone - in case it's for me. ~
For David Williams 'Twenty (words)/Twenty (syllables)' Contest by Charles Clive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/30/2013 4:37:00 PM
Charles, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/28/2013 7:50:00 AM
you make poetry sound simple and easy to write yet again so very interesting
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:33:00 AM
ahh.. u have stolen my feeling... use to feel d same...
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Date: 3/25/2013 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on "Loneliness" being featured.
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Date: 3/4/2012 10:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Charles! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/4/2012 1:38:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..I hope that the call comes through..Sara
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Date: 3/3/2012 11:14:00 AM
This was a really touching one, it made me want to say "Oh shucks" when I read it-- really enjoyed this-- great job you did here!
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Date: 3/3/2012 8:52:00 AM
Congrats, Charles. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:48:00 PM
well, I LOVE this one, it's a bout a cat and it's very nicely rhymed. Congrats on the HM.
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Date: 3/2/2012 4:44:00 PM
Charles, well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:02:00 AM
congrats Charles on winning an HM for this unique write luv..
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:06:00 AM
i like this poem and would have place it higher in the contest. nice job!
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations this is so sad love it xx
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2012 1:31:00 PM
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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