Loneliness

Loneliness
Some say I’m big
Some say I’ve grown up 
Some say I’m still young 
Which one of these do I believe? 
Dad wishes my sisters and me to be sisters
But I said: dad how could I?
How could I live with someone I hate?
Some say I lack responsibility
But the truth is they lack truth
 They lack the vision..,
The vision of who to believe? Who to trust?
I cry alone, I laugh alone, I die from suffer
I lose all friends, I have no mercy
I miss all memories, I forget them…
I burn in pride, but fall in regret
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nubani Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 11:07 AM
thank u sooo much :D
Dominick Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:03 AM
I love your last two lines; they say it all. - Best, Karen
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