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Loneliness

Darkness fulfils me, Like an angry cloud, Succumbs the sky, Capturing any glimpse of light. Knotty breath, As wind against a rock, Gently caresses the surface, Barely enough to endure, Life's ever existence. Serenity flares, Like an eternal flame, Longing to shatter, And sharpen the senses, Imprison your words. Empty spoilt hole, Yearning desire, A warm embrace, Resuscitation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/27/2016 1:14:00 PM
SABA, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 10/22/2008 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2008 7:18:00 AM
Nice use of imagery in this. I really like the last two lines--a fresh slant on your idea. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2008 9:05:00 PM
Saba congrats on having your poem featured this week - excellent job - God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations Saba on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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