Loneliest Winter Day

December clouds are falling, 
falling into gray from a heavy sky 
of snowy tears as if newly widowed
brides in white are gathered on high
to bid one last farewell to love, 
and all the while, a morning fog thickens,
then, settles on a desolate earth
like a memory of last year's blizzard.

Migrating birds, too, bid farewell
as the hazy winter morn
abruptly turns to anguished night.
Even a grieving sun stays hidden
behind closed curtains...uncertain
of our planet's slowing orbit
on this, the loneliest of winter days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Brilliant writing Rhonda. Congratulations on your win.
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Flows with the delicacy of a beautiful snowflake... Congrats on a much deserved win, dear friend... Hugs.. Arlene
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:23 PM
congratulations Rhonda on this wonderful poem and win
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Very beautiful poem that images the feel of Winter so well, Rhonda. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Hugs, Sandra
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 3:09 AM
"snowy tears as if newly widowed" my fav.7++++. Superb Rhonda. You deserve a Honda. Congrats. Kiss to your hand and your Golden pen. Perfect 10....Your friend
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Just emailed you a really long email. Hope I don't bore you to tears!! So it is your birthday. Wow, happy birthday, darling girl, and Congrats on this wonderful win. It is a very good poem! the title was very well portrayed.
Kayode Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Congrats on the win and happy belated birthday my good friend...huggs
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:52 PM
well versed poem, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Hello Rhonda, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Rhonda, this poem is perfect. Has an awesome flow... Too Perfect.. LOL... Love it...PD
Yvonne Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 2:57 AM
Even winters loneliest day smiles at the end of you pen.
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Hi Rhonda! Wish you and your family Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2015. God bless you. Explore life. Be peace , be in peace. Love-Rajat
Song Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:57 PM
I was right there with you Rhonda, as though looking out the very same window of gloominess! Oh, when spring comes the poetic pen will run out of ink! I just know it will! Merry Christmas to you and may these lonely winter days be replaced with the joy of our Savior's birth! :)
Haight Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Hi Rhonda, your words paint a gray, lonely Winter day, but I also feel the calm and peacefulness of your words that are so comforting. I time to slow down and catch our breath before the rebirth of Spring. Hope you have a Blessed Christmas. Hugs, Sandra
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December 22, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Lovely poem of winter's arrival ! I felt like wrapping my arms into a coat of down, and taking a walk in the frosty air! Sometimes being alone, is time to meditate, and let the loneliness be a time to heal from the pace of the day. Nicely done, Rhonda.....good luck. And wishing you a wonderful Christmas !
Miers Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 12:16 PM
a poignant, soulful piece. as Poe said,' melancholy is the most useful of all the poetic tools.'
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Enjoyed the write on the depression during the winter time, Rhonda
Sivey Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 7:18 AM
I too understand the meaning of this sad write, a powerful write it is my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem here this morning! You have delighted me with this tremendous piece! Great Work!!
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 6:50 AM
With the Winter solstice upon us it can be a very depressing day...With me it has been filled with happiness the past 17 years since my oldest son was born...beautifully penned Rhonda...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:46 AM
such sad imagery so beautifully penned gave me such a sense of loss:-( hugs jan x
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