Lone Leaf On the Wind

lone leaf on the wind
dancing to a symphony...
snow falls silently
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Agustin Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 11:26 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Hawkins Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 6:03 PM
What a lovely picture you painted with so few words. A wonderous, Haiku, JC Happy New Year. Take care, Shirley
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 5:09 AM
The power of 3 always gets to me. I salute you and your ability to paint with words so effectively. Your scenes are so crystal clear. Best regards David in NZ
Goldsmith Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Your "lone leaf on the wind" is a "Beautiful" write. Three lines tells a wonderful story. Love It. I miss your writes. I wish you would write more. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Aranas Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 5:58 PM
Hi JC! This Haiku is romantic!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Hi JC, your haiku is breathtaking...."lone leaf on the wind" dancing......is a symphony! Blessings, Paulette
Salehi Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Beautiful Symphony
Fleming Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 10:57 PM
Oh JC... This is very visually engaging. Love it!!
Darnell Sr Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Hi, JC! I love your micro-poem. I see your leaf still in the wind. How are you, my friend? Excellently penned, my friend. Best of Wishes, William
Castellenas Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 11:12 AM
Perfect use of words. You said everything needed in so few words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Watt Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 10:36 AM
JC, I like your musical overtones for this chilly fall write. I've missed seeing you. Take care, my friend ~ John
One Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Vivid imagery JC....
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