Notes About The Poem

July 4, 2023 

Contest : Humorous Poems

Sponsored by : Jay Narain

 

LOL

I faced this man with whom I had an affinity
This is what I found him express with authority.

You’re handsome, and absolutely adorable
Face emits intelligent sparks of smile stable.

You’re rational, but at times tangentially crank
Your body has an ego-centric language frank.

Your charisma and eclectic elan espouse cheers
The eyes encase rosy dreams, and at times tears.

You’re caring and glow with gregarious grace
If you’re to run to get her, you’ll win the race. 

Enormously elated, I looked close, and lol to see
In the mirror this known man standing before me.
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Allison Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 11:34 AM
oh so clever I love the twist at the end Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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