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lokt

lokt dikshuneri
kipin eet, kees laustt
diss iys hardd

lokt mynd
kent tingk
wer diyd mye 
spelink en mynd gaw?

awt da weendoe

nid napp baad

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De R

Date: 9/7/2011 6:03:00 AM

PS: You have lost of typos in this one! :))

De R

Date: 9/7/2011 6:02:00 AM

Translate, please. :)) Ok, you need a nap, that's no news--haha :D 'diss iys hardd' to read. :P

Skat A

Date: 8/7/2010 1:20:00 PM

Nikko:) I c what U R talking about. U need a napp baad. Very cute*luv~SKAT

Kris Walters

Date: 8/5/2010 6:06:00 AM

This one took me a while, lol. Sometimes I feel this way... haha. Of course I'm always in need of a good nap. Interesting, made me work for it. Kris

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/5/2010 4:10:00 AM

Great creation, Nikko! weri gut rait, injoit tis lait poetree!!! This looks great and you should write more in this way! Enjoyed! Lahat ng mga pinakamahusay na, Gert :)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/5/2010 12:09:00 AM

lol.ohh.i see now! wow, you're like the best mis speller i've read today! this is harddd.. ~Always

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/5/2010 12:01:00 AM

eh? is this another language? if so, is it your language? ~Always

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2010 9:38:00 PM

Yes you need a bad nap,,or else you are enjoying your own typos..lol,,kidding,,this was a fun poem Nikko,..p..d

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 6:04:00 PM

Once I realized you were actually saying something, I finally reread it and GOT it. haha. geeeez. you were doing it in dialect too, so that made it extra hard! Luv, Andrea

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/4/2010 6:00:00 PM

Haha, I am laughing so hard... at myself for being so dumb. I looked at this and thought it was Tagalog and wondered why you hadn't added a translation,hahahaha. Very cute poem, it caught this mynd awt ~ Sharon :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2010 8:26:00 AM

Hi Nikko, Had to read this a few times, but enjoyed trying to translate the "spelink." This is how I write when a "nid napp baad." Fun poem! Love, Carolyn

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