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Dearest soup tech Who I love and respect I write to you So that you may know I've tried to be here With iPad and cheer But the login fails me No action tells me Of possible broken links One maybe Just maybe.... My iPad stinks Meanwhile I sigh As I try to not cry As I type again And hope with intent That you might check in ... And tell me How to begin... Xoxo Wish me luck I'm about To push The Button...

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The Situation

Date: 2/16/2024 5:18:00 AM

All the pass words that you forget so easily. I'm glad they posted this piece, but the soup Is one place I keep secure.

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 1/12/2024 5:42:00 AM

Very good!

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:34:00 AM

TYVM

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 12/3/2023 11:31:00 PM

Hello ?? This is an interesting poem and good luck in pushing the button.

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:35:00 AM

Tyvm

Sabrina Millicent

Date: 10/31/2023 12:38:00 AM

Really enjoyed reading this and love the undertone of the seriousness in the poem.

Susan Mills

Date: 10/9/2023 2:51:00 AM

You definitely will stand the test of time as a poet. Such perserverence and tenacity. It's a cute poem. Good luck!

Deborah Chukwu

Date: 10/6/2023 12:54:00 PM

Its beautiful.

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:35:00 AM

Tyvm

Karen Jones

Date: 9/25/2023 1:47:00 AM

Occasionally there are glitches on Poetry Soup. I wrote a comment only to have it not post yet another poets post showed up using my name and theirs! This poem is is funny. I like it.

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:36:00 AM

Thanks, I will keep that in mind.

Nelson Olalekan

Date: 9/7/2023 3:57:00 PM

Great,success though

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:36:00 AM

Tyvm

Christopher Grieves

Date: 9/1/2023 12:53:00 AM

I wonder how many IT, engineering, techie types have poems or odes written to them..? It is great and an idea I may myself deploy. V. enjoyable (hope you got the desired result Izzy)

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 7/20/2023 12:38:00 PM

Hi Izzy, funny one ??. Thanks for sharing.

Khadijah Augie

Date: 5/24/2023 2:13:00 AM

KH9

Lawrence Ingle

Date: 4/26/2023 6:51:00 AM

Sounds somewhat like me trying to get on poetry soup site here! lol

Fazal Faroqui

Date: 4/16/2023 3:22:00 AM

Happy Birthday Happy Birthday ?? my dear Who says romance is the fiefdom of only the youth? Even today, I drink from your eyes, Your smile causes a ripple in my ?? heart Your love ?? hides the secrets of my soul. In every snowy flake of winter, In the rain ??? drops of Summer I see your face In all my sorrows In all my celebrations You are my life. In the tumultuous waves of life Your the North Star ??, leading me to the shore. You are the Divine candle ??? lighting up my path. The beautiful rose ?? whose fragrance envelopes me I am the drunken dervish whirling around you. - Dr Fazal Faroqui

Karen Dillon

Date: 3/17/2023 6:38:00 AM

Hi, Love it, love the seriousness masked by humour. It made me smile

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Karen.

Susan Mills

Date: 2/16/2023 11:42:00 AM

Very witty! And unique. Enjoyed!

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/21/2023 7:47:00 AM

A beautiful tech used to write a great poem. Loved always,bl

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, BL.

Jennifer Spase

Date: 1/9/2023 5:04:00 PM

Wow. Humour comedy and good medicine for the soul. I like how you put it .

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2022 7:42:00 AM

Great humor comes from and attracts great minds. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you too, Sara!

Paul Bell

Date: 12/4/2022 3:44:00 AM

This is why I carry a big hammer. iPads fear me now. Tech shops love me.

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:02:00 AM

Allan Terry

Date: 12/2/2022 12:40:00 PM

Might non be. spent! To secure your loyalties. The apples of the garden; she chorest me. Of love she is neither Her submissive ways I find. Teechinacal differences, a sweet remind ! Pimped from her responsibilities She chores as whore and as Mother, a responsibility which aludes me. She chooses me to make I'll, from her Lack of knowledge. A old meanspirited bitch; Who should have taught Dyke at College!

Allan Terry

Date: 12/2/2022 12:30:00 PM

Who makes me enemy? Might I respond! The wine soaked beefs are curing. Might I respond. Holla if you hear me Or is space a chore for. man? Instruments of alienation. Tech respond if you can. The lithiums of stored bought mades. Connections to speak. All men she she encompass. Non are of senerity. Cool she Makes me, her adornments a world sees. Stop me before we Error, World, speak then to me! Labor than she who whorist most!

Kelly Page

Date: 12/2/2022 11:58:00 AM

Day flipping behind closed curtains sending the bottle to wash ashore. Searching the storm for a finger to break the revolving gray canvas. The brush frayed the pallet empty of color distilled into black and white. Shaky lines scribbled as the message fades into the swells, lost at sea. This tiny boat it's bow beating through the thrashing white cap waves. Finding it's harbor encased in glass, beached again on the wine soaked sand. Trapped with the squawking seagulls and the lighthouse call. Empty the bottle tossed to Poseidon once more.

Allan Terry

Date: 12/1/2022 4:08:00 PM

What than compliments Are in a mutation A call to speak in Communication To convey a wanted sound a worded script to resound Mirror the image of chores Labored men Might she call So then vegans From distance make they labors meet To scale the voice from Our first greet Make it right Keep me sane A super frill The love we've made

Allan Terry

Date: 12/1/2022 4:07:00 PM

Manon Boudreau Star Child Nebula

Date: 11/30/2022 6:38:00 PM

Playful write. I can read the tech lingo. Love the play on words. I truly can relate. The joy of technology maintenance.