Log Fire

Into the flames
I pitched the final log,
that I had cut with special care.
Not meant for the fire though,
but to carve names upon.
The names of lovers.

Into the flames
I pitched a final dream -
hallucinating as a child
through a romantic eye.
Seeing shadows in the vapours,
that might have been lovers.

One last look
I remind myself 
before the draught takes all.
And a memory hangs there
for a moment.
Disappearing without a word -
the silence of a lover's farewell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:11 AM
Whoa!! Quite a unique work you have written. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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April 12, 2026 at 7:03 AM
Thank you for your kind words. Joe O
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