Luis Martinez-Rivera Poet Free verse

Locked Out

Momentous day!

Resounding
thunder-
desperate wonder,
heated desolation.

Chilly breeze,
leaves of grey,
wishing of red-
cursed door.

Are we still holding on?
Or walking-
the moon underneath-

Rest assure- blood-
pounding, pounding.

The door-
finally!

Ajar.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 22, 2012 at 7:36 AM A joy to read and congratulate you on your well deserved featured poem this week Luis. Love, Carol

Luis Martinez-Rivera August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM Wrote this after getting locked out of my apartment. It's meant to be funny but should not cheapen the poetry this is so much more than what you may think it is.