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Locked Out

Momentous day! Resounding thunder- desperate wonder, heated desolation. Chilly breeze, leaves of grey, wishing of red- cursed door. Are we still holding on? Or walking- the moon underneath- Rest assure- blood- pounding, pounding. The door- finally! Ajar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 7:36:00 AM
A joy to read and congratulate you on your well deserved featured poem this week Luis. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2012 12:00:00 AM
Wrote this after getting locked out of my apartment. It's meant to be funny but should not cheapen the poetry this is so much more than what you may think it is.
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