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Locked In a Smile

locked in a smile are secrets untold reality waiting for love to unfold anxiously waiting are words that are kept inside my heart to an unknown depth for unto you i give my eyes for my eyes there is no greater prize for unto you i give my ears for each utterance and every syllable it hears locked in a smile are secrets untold of lips that would kiss you and hands that would hold arms that would embrace if you grew cold to give you my heart is my highest goal a love everlasting as we both grow old locked in a smile are secrets untold of love that reached all the way to the soul in you i'd place my loyalty in you i'd place my fate in you i'd place my honor in promises and vows of faith you are a restless spirit a plague inside my mind invading every inch and every minute of time locked in a smile are secrets untold of how you are my heaven and how you are my hell my mind paints pictures of me loving you so well yet i wait for the day when i'm brave enough to tell wishing you felt the same that would be so swell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/21/2012 11:16:00 PM
‡ Wow, First I Must Gladly Let Your Loving Heart Know That Aside From My Dear Close Friends That I Have Known My Entire Lifetime, Sweet Precious John, You Are The First And Only Man Here At Poetry Soup In Which I Have Chosen As A Favourite Poet. After Viewing This Beautiful Favourite, Instantly, I Knew That You Would Be. Mesmerizing In Spellbinding Beauty. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡
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John Loving Iii
Date: 10/22/2012 4:28:00 AM
Dear Rachel, I am honored to be among your favorite poets. And I hope that I will be able to keep up my standard that you have placed so high. And keep giving you the feeling that takes you to other places. Making you feel at least for the moment a bliss from someone besides ourselves. Bringing love alive.
Date: 5/28/2012 12:58:00 PM
AN AWESOME WRITE JOHN. love phyl
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:57:00 AM
Wow ...i really like your style of writing....your poems just flow and have such great messages intertwined within. Love the idea that a Smile has so much locked with it.......I think of the Mona Lisa and the mystery behind the slight smile........Shaz
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:03:00 AM
Well Dear John. Normally I can't get through the epic poems. You captured me with the first line and I just couldn't quit (nor did I want to). Just beautiful. No wonder your last name is Loving.
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Date: 5/29/2012 9:35:00 AM
If I write an epic you better hope you find it.
Date: 5/23/2012 5:19:00 PM
yeah another day at home, decluttering and dusting your musty old music boxes with a feather duster that looks like roadkill on a stick, while you're busy at the office doing 'office stuff'...
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John Loving Iii
Date: 5/23/2012 8:00:00 PM
dusting is what you call it?
Date: 5/23/2012 4:07:00 PM
Beautiful. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:12:00 AM
Sounds like there is a lucky lady out there somewhere. Yet another lovely romantic poem John. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:53:00 PM
another day at the office?
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 5/23/2012 5:21:00 PM
yep that's me!!
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John Loving Iii
Date: 5/18/2012 9:34:00 PM
That's you?!
Date: 5/17/2012 8:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem, John! God bless, Maureen
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:35:00 AM
You sure are didicated to make it all it should be. But love is elusive and we aren't always able to control the direction it takes. Love your writes John, they are always so full of human emotions; amazing!
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Date: 5/13/2012 3:41:00 PM
Interesting work..Yes, it does take two for the love to work..Great topic chosen on which to write...Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Thanks for the kind review of my work..Your presence was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2012 8:17:00 AM
Smile ˜ "Owww, You Make Me Blush & My Heart Rush, My Dear Precious, Sweeet & Beautiful John * I Could Feel Every Beautiful Word Whispering Softly Unto My Soul; Such Tender Love * Beautiful & I Shall Favour 'This Melody Of Priceless Splendours * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:18:00 PM
Hello John, I love this piece of yours..so in tuned with the feelings that you hsve for her..great write!
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning John III. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 4:41:00 PM
This is a well-written poem and I enjoyed reading it today.
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Date: 5/8/2012 2:18:00 PM
Brilliant writing John - well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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