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I look outside the window, and I hear the sparrows' songs. I listen to nature's harmony, and I tell myself, "be strong." As I miss all of spring's beauty, like a little bird homebound. As I keep strictly my duty, staying safe and sound.

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Date: 7/22/2020 10:17:00 AM
Nice work, Victoria. So few words portray our universal experience. Blessings.
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Date: 5/17/2020 4:58:00 PM
I enjoyed this piece immensely !
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Date: 5/15/2020 5:02:00 PM
This lovely poem embraces the sacrifices we are all making during this pandemic so brilliantly Victoria! Congratulations on your deserving Trophy from the Poetry Soup Team! Quite an achievement! Blessings xxoo
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 5/16/2020 11:04:00 AM
Thank you,Connie! I am very happy!
Date: 5/15/2020 1:23:00 PM
I liked the snappy rhythm of this lovely write! Congrats! ~ Gershon
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 5/16/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Happy you like it!
Date: 5/15/2020 11:13:00 AM
Short, sweet, and to the point. Well done!
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 5/16/2020 11:06:00 AM
Thank you, Dalton! I am very happy you like it!
Date: 5/14/2020 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations, short and perfect
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 5/16/2020 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Jacquelee!!
Date: 5/14/2020 8:36:00 AM
Very pretty... congratulations!
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 5/16/2020 11:08:00 AM
1Aww thanks, Martin! I am so so happy!
Date: 5/14/2020 7:24:00 AM
Nice words play. Now this make me think about the animal we keep them on cage(i think they feel the same as your last stanza says) Hongera (swahili/my language where am from) = congratulations
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 5/16/2020 11:08:00 AM
Thank you! I am happy you like it!
Date: 5/13/2020 3:25:00 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations!
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 6/4/2020 2:40:00 AM
Thank you!!:)
Date: 5/13/2020 3:26:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. God bless you.
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 6/4/2020 2:41:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 5/12/2020 10:28:00 PM
Very nice, just my thoughts on this stay home thing:-)
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:12:00 PM
Hello Victoria Georgieve, very nicely done. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/12/2020 1:51:00 PM
Be strong indeed, as Spring plants it's seed. The air and song so sweet. Let's hope it's soon, we can all go forward from this sad retreat. Congrats on your #1 placement Victoria.
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Date: 5/12/2020 1:23:00 PM
Victoria, Congratulations on your win! Well-captured feeling for meeting self-discipline's need. David
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Date: 5/12/2020 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations Victoria! This is beautiful in it’s sad simplicity. Quite a win, beating off 249 others! Well done!
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Date: 5/12/2020 12:42:00 PM
Congrats, Victoria! I feel like this...
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Date: 5/12/2020 12:03:00 PM
This is a gem. Congrats on top honors, Victoria. Well done!
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Date: 5/12/2020 11:31:00 AM
A wonderful write Victoria.
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Date: 5/12/2020 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations Victoria! Stay safe
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Date: 5/12/2020 11:15:00 AM
beautiful in its simplicity I can see why it was the winner, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2020 10:23:00 AM
Victoria, congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 5/12/2020 10:17:00 AM
Victoria, congratulations with your #1 placement out of 250! Well done ~ John
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Date: 5/12/2020 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations with this wonderful poem, Victoria.
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Date: 5/12/2020 9:46:00 AM
Congrats on your number one spot! Well done! Short and sweet!
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Date: 5/12/2020 9:41:00 AM
Congrats, Victoria. You connect the beauty of nature and its harmony with us. You say so much in so few words. Well deserved placement, my friend. Stay safe. Blessings.
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