Locked Behind a Dark Door

Locked behind a dark door I am lost and alone,
separate from my family, no place to call home.

I battle with my fears and fight with my thoughts,
seems the harder I try, the more I get lost.

Help is near but yet so far away,
searching for peace, but the pain will stay.

Freedom? I am looking but unable to find,
my soul is lost, with no peace of mind.

Silence is my enemy, I am unable to speak,
I fear for my future, emotions at their peek.

I will try to keep faith for what my future has in store,
for now I remain, locked behind a dark door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/17/2014 2:05:00 PM
Reminds me of the song by the Rolling Stones. "Paint it Black". Dark vision well expressed. Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:01:00 PM
Colleen, amazing win............ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/17/2013 8:42:00 AM
You paint a dark - yet compelling picture here. Peace Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:16:00 AM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:25:00 PM
Hi Dearest Colleen, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 12:31:00 PM
What a great job........and Richard must be smiling that his lines inspired your words!
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Colleen xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:49:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Colleen
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations Colleen. This is a moving poem and one of your best. Thanks for entering it in my contest. I am moved you chose my poem. I still wish for you to have your butterfly dreams.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:22:00 AM
Colleen there is always light if we look hard enough I hope you find yours congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/7/2013 3:10:00 PM
Colleen, I hope you are not feeling like this no more... you need to move to Texas, were the last place you want to be is inside... unless we have the AC on blast... JK.. miss you...Linda
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Date: 8/21/2013 9:07:00 AM
short and to the point, I like it. for a matter of time I tink we all are locked behind a dark door and hope for a better, we just have to fight and believe it's going to be better.
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Date: 8/21/2013 1:02:00 AM
How nice, this contest is next on my "to do" list. You are always one ahead of me!! Good to see you honoring a poet like Richard.
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Date: 8/15/2013 8:24:00 PM
:-) :-) :-) :-) Colleen, where are you?? hope you are taking the medication for the ear infection... xox...Linda
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Date: 8/13/2013 12:32:00 AM
We are so much alike. This is me too.
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Date: 8/12/2013 8:29:00 PM
Hello Colleen, wow! you took be deep into the walls of your soul. I wish I had the key to unlock that door for you... I am here for you and you know it.... i hate pain and how it keeps us from moving on... your emotions are raw... good luck in Richard Contest.... xox~ love xox ~ LINDA
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Date: 8/12/2013 5:51:00 PM
A great write Colleen, wishing you luck in the contest... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/12/2013 5:52:00 AM
A sure winner Colleen, very well written .Sad and dramatic ! Anne
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