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Locked Behind a Dark Door

Locked behind a dark door I am lost and alone, separate from my family, no place to call home. I battle with my fears and fight with my thoughts, seems the harder I try, the more I get lost. Help is near but yet so far away, searching for peace, but the pain will stay. Freedom? I am looking but unable to find, my soul is lost, with no peace of mind. Silence is my enemy, I am unable to speak, I fear for my future, emotions at their peek. I will try to keep faith for what my future has in store, for now I remain, locked behind a dark door.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/17/2014 2:05:00 PM

Reminds me of the song by the Rolling Stones. "Paint it Black". Dark vision well expressed. Peace & Love Matthew Ansih

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/17/2013 1:26:00 PM

stop being sad because your sad because your sad. somebody thinks about you besides your family. namely ME Linda and a few other friends who know how you feel. sad because your sad.

Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 2:01:00 PM

Colleen, amazing win............ luv ~SKAT~

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/17/2013 8:42:00 AM

You paint a dark - yet compelling picture here. Peace Love Matthew Anish

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/14/2013 7:16:00 AM

congrats on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 8:25:00 PM

Hi Dearest Colleen, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/13/2013 12:31:00 PM

What a great job........and Richard must be smiling that his lines inspired your words!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/13/2013 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Colleen xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2013 8:49:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Colleen

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2013 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations Colleen. This is a moving poem and one of your best. Thanks for entering it in my contest. I am moved you chose my poem. I still wish for you to have your butterfly dreams.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/13/2013 7:22:00 AM

Colleen there is always light if we look hard enough I hope you find yours congrats on win Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2013 3:10:00 PM

Colleen, I hope you are not feeling like this no more... you need to move to Texas, were the last place you want to be is inside... unless we have the AC on blast... JK.. miss you...Linda

Arnold Stucz

Date: 8/21/2013 9:07:00 AM

short and to the point, I like it. for a matter of time I tink we all are locked behind a dark door and hope for a better, we just have to fight and believe it's going to be better.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2013 1:02:00 AM

How nice, this contest is next on my "to do" list. You are always one ahead of me!! Good to see you honoring a poet like Richard.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2013 8:24:00 PM

:-) :-) :-) :-) Colleen, where are you?? hope you are taking the medication for the ear infection... xox...Linda

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/13/2013 12:32:00 AM

We are so much alike. This is me too.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2013 8:29:00 PM

Hello Colleen, wow! you took be deep into the walls of your soul. I wish I had the key to unlock that door for you... I am here for you and you know it.... i hate pain and how it keeps us from moving on... your emotions are raw... good luck in Richard Contest.... xox~ love xox ~ LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/12/2013 5:51:00 PM

A great write Colleen, wishing you luck in the contest... LOVE ~SKAT~

Anne Rutherford

Date: 8/12/2013 5:52:00 AM

A sure winner Colleen, very well written .Sad and dramatic ! Anne