Local Diner Ladies

This wasn’t requested, but eluded too,
A poem for us, what written by you,
It is different, it’s gonna take time,
Third person writing, composing this thyme,
My name is Kelly, work at L D,
Along with Vanessa, similarities you’ll see,
Both twenty-two, blonde and brunette,
Both date guys, not married yet,
Fifteen years, our senior they are,
Both drive a truck, SUV, or car,
There are three kids in my relationship,
That’s what I told Sam, as coffee he sip,
Vanessa has two, her beau has one,
Third person writing is really quite fun,
We both go to college, not the same place,
Our hair is different and so is our face,
But that’s normal explanation you see,
We’re not sisters, no relation be,
Well here comes Janet, owner’s kid,
I’ll tell you her age, but it’ll be hid,
Tens place holder, square root son’s age,
This could take longer, than just one page,
Units digit, little complicated,
Calculating it, sophisticated,
It’s the cube root, from a Beatles song,
Complete the sentence, it won’t take long,
Not sure the title two word precede,
“When I’m ----- - ----”, is all your gonna need,
The spaces above, represent the word,
Just fill it in the space, I know you’ve heard,
So a closing thought, before I go,
Kelly didn’t write it, if ya wanna know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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