Loam


This is the story of a little girl
whose name was always misremembered
But we won't explore that today
Her name was probably the least interesting thing about her-

“My parents never liked the dirt.
They said it was too filthy for us city folks to touch
But I loved the dirt
It had grains, textures, secrets and a whole ecosystem within it

But my mum loathed the loam
Said it wasn't for us
I saw the dirt as a refuge
A sanctuary for the ones we abandoned 

Maybe that's why I loved the dirt 
It had a place for the problems we couldn't solve,
burdens we couldn't bear,
fractures we couldn't heal,
sins we couldn't absolve,
mistakes we couldn't undo,
sorrows we couldn't soothe,
ruins we couldn't restore,
 the magic we couldn't decipher,
And the deformities we couldn't forsake 

I loved digging too
Just like the crypt I've been digging for myself since I was 6
I never jumped in,I just dug it deeper

The dirt never complained 
As I punctured a spot for myself in its heart
Maybe that's why I loved the dirt
For letting me carve into its core

Or maybe I loved it for something completely different 
I guess we'll never know.”

Now the little girl lies
In a completely different grave
For hers was way too deep
Deeper than 6 feet

As she lies 6 feet under
In the dirt she once loved
Now,Her mother doesn't loathe the loam 
The dirt suddenly isn't filthy anymore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Borg Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 9:32 PM
Jafina, this is a sad but very beautiful poem, a wonderful introduction of your talent. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
Agustin Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 3:49 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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