Loaded

loaded
           full of crap
not nearly enough
                                     powder
                awesome
screams overwrought

breath in and out
like
                             hiccups

the coo of a dove
            eyes follow
what dangles

from your fingertips
and
                          love

flows freely
    released
by a sucking sound

4/4/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Ah, a hunter's delight; because it is all about the kill, after all. Ha!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 7:25 PM
LOL... ::
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