Living Waters

Curtain white cool bright
Water drapes cascade delight
Living waters fall











Entered into Raul's contest, Rhythm of the Falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ginn Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 6:07 PM
I've always wondered what it would be like to be under a waterfall. The sound would be awesome and I agree full of life. Good write Leon
Anish Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 2:57 PM
Reminds me of my trip to Niagra Falls. Nice Peace Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. This Haiku is very descriptive. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
Owens Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:11 PM
I just now found your Haiku...It's so beautiful...Good luck in the contest...Marty
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Leon. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Very beautiful..i think its a winner. Bg
Moreno Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 11:13 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest Leon...Raul
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October 12, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Quite a beautiful interpretation of the photo Raul posted, Leon! Much luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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