Living Truth

When the wind blows in, 
total view is upon us.
No cloud is in sight,
sun drifts low.
Colours everywhere,
bright angels around,
birds flapping their farewell fevers,
paying no attention to our movement.
Slowly towards the seafront,
opens the gate for eternal freedom.

Never look back, 
never look back.

Nor take our eyes away from this moment,
because right here forever,
we will stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lacey Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Simply Amazing Ryan. I love it....Michelle xo
Hanna Barany Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 2:56 PM
I love this one Ryan. Lynn B.
Jackson Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Thank you for your comments :)
Anderson Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
Tacito Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Gorgeous. Well done, Ryan.
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