Living the Rainy Day

Creeping clouds dissolve on the grey misty ground,
rains slant on the trail of surging waves of torrent.
You feel the sliding sky is falling on you and
seek protection under an open umbrella
you carry for its multi-colors match your mind’s hue.
The transient colors melt in the teary rains of sorrow,
flow like a stream of tinted emotions,
meandering on the washed out pathway 
you travelled aimless to where you’re
in the midst of nowhere on a rainy day. 
With the mind drained out you stand desolate,
the solitude of the rain-soaked day fills the void
with the promise of the rising crystalline horizon
reflecting the last tinge of the departing day
that you’d want to seize and live the moment
painting the rain-rinsed mind once again
where emotions will be colored by the rainbow.

September 14, 2018
Contest : Rainy Day
Sponsored by : Sara Kendrick
Picture chosen : 5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 3:21 PM
Well written, Subimal . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Your lovely serene poem should garner lots of attention in Sara's contest Subimal! Congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest! : )
Ibeh Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Nicely done, Subimal!:-) Enjoyed. Congrats on a fine win!
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Excellent way to bring the theme of Carpe Diem. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for your participation in my contest. Congrats on your win. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 1:18 AM
Thank you, Sara for the placement.
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 8:30 PM
gosh, you waxed very poetic with this one, Subimal. Well done!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:59 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Rowe Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Beautiful imagery and a wonderful interpretation of your selected image. Good luck in the contest.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 4:19 AM
Thank you, Jesse.
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