Living the Present Moment Fully

Tinges of radiant images drift through my mind, as the gas light blinks with the harlequin moon, squinting around edges of fragile reveries when such fascination of now begins to unfold: And nightfall’s hours plead for replays while I hover in limbo from a trance-- My entire being focused on this singular instance , pouring secrecy of thoughts, raw and fresh. Long the gazes outlining a visual language -- these interplays between a rail of young stars and cotton candy clouds on an eveningscape... until my very essence savors a north wind fondling my cheeks where an astral travel with breaths discover mystical Orion-- perhaps galaxies unknown by any name: Then at this moment, every quiver, each rhythm, all free movements, time's rare stillness honors an existence grounded in present tense, on fire. In Moment of Time 7/25/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Well done, nette. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations, Nette, on your win. The beauty of this poem is wondrous. Enjoyed.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Wow...what a moment Nette! You excelled on your entry in this contest. Your imagery was wild and free and it left me breathless! Gorgeous! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Third Placement! : )
Warrior Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on your excellent win...love & light...^WW^
Neumann Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 2:02 AM
Hi Nette. Congratulations on your win in my contest. A wonderful poem, Kai
Dutta Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Lovely write in beauty of present. All the best.
Man Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Nette, your moment in time surpasses beauty. You've painted feelings sacred. The reading was euphoric. My exhale is awe!
Michael Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 10:30 AM
In the moment here, there and everywhere, into galaxies, dimensions, or just in the atmosphere... a meditation of peace...All the best nette
Sergi Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Hi nette: Your exquisite writing is definitely in the moment!
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Good work. If for a contest, reads like a good contender. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Paras Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Any moment becomes a treasure when quality attention to it is given fully. I cleared the garage and I was just there completely. Woman, this poem is eloquent!
Ashley Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Your exquisite poem brings me beautifully and mindfully into this blissful poetic moment, Nette. Superb! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Quite the moment Nette, well done...
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 3:22 PM
You described blessed moments, nette..in scenic images..grounded in present tense on fire!
Andresen Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:47 PM
- Lovely written, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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