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Living the Dream

Enamored in adulation of your whispering night I adore charming moonlit sky, arousing doting vibes, Seducing the peeking stars on incandescent arc Beholden to romantic flame blazing in your eyes, Wooing constellations twinkling in an astral dance Amid outburst of meteor storms, celestial sparks Knowing that is everything you ever asked for From tangerine emotions scripted on lovesick skies, When in embrace of soft twilight, holding my hands, Deep within thoughts, you fondly fancied about What it would be like to hear euphony of affection In eternity of love-song warbling from our hearts, As we take this evening into bosoms of new dawn And kiss the resplendent morn in each other’s arms Living the dream of ruby visions in butterfly nebula Floating in cosmos on coral wingspans of romance. October 17, 2019 Placed 2nd: Living the dream poetry contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier Placed 3rd: Strand select D contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/18/2020 3:47:00 PM

"What it would be like to hear euphony of affection"...wonderfully written :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/20/2019 11:49:00 PM

I love this poem, with its beautifully vivid imagery and romantic message. The poem itself, is a dream! Congratulations, Vijay!

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 11/15/2019 2:07:00 PM

Very romantic and fully poetic! Congratulations Vijay!

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/11/2019 11:04:00 AM

Absolute romance floats from these lines. Congratulations, Vijay!

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/11/2019 11:04:00 AM

Absolute romance floats from these lines. Congratulations, Vijay!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/10/2019 8:00:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your top placement on the best 100 poems.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2019 8:16:00 AM

Much appreciate Eve--many thanks for the return visit.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 11/10/2019 12:23:00 PM

You painted romance well here Vijay, fine quill friend;-)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2019 5:06:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2019 8:06:00 PM

This is about as dreamy as living the dream gets, Vijay! Congrats for your placement.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 8:54:00 AM

Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/28/2019 11:42:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Vijay!! Romantic phrasings of such soulful intensity ... an ink serenade expressed w/Bard baritone musing, oh so elegantly beautiful. A poetic masterpiece! Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 8:53:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments Freddie--many thanks.

Midnight Aurora

Date: 10/27/2019 5:28:00 PM

I love your use of vocabulary. It's great to see a plethora of great words in one piece.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 9:31:00 AM

Much appreciate MA--many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/25/2019 4:38:00 PM

Lovely penning Vijay, full of great imagery with much insight to make one ponder. Blessings,Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2019 8:49:00 AM

Much appreciate Gordon--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/24/2019 9:08:00 PM

Floating in a dream- and that is where you take me, with your words of love. The beauty in so many magical moments. It is simply breathtaking indeed. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 2:45:00 PM

Much appreciate your wonderful comments my friend--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/23/2019 11:56:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2019 9:38:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/23/2019 10:12:00 AM

We have just to open wide our hearts and live the dream you have exquisitely presented for your avid readers to wallow in! A great entry worthy of an outshining win, dear Vijay.. into my fave list for its beauty.. Best regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 3:26:00 PM

Thank you for the kind feedback, Besma..always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/22/2019 8:08:00 PM

Wow this was beautiful Vijay! Amazing!;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/22/2019 4:08:00 PM

Your imagery and creative talent once again shines in an absolute gem of a poem my friend - living the dream of ruby visions.............. thru to ............wingspans of romance - such excellent poetry. Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 3:24:00 PM

Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.