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Living the dream

Enamored in adulation of your whispering night I adore charming moonlit sky, arousing doting vibes, Seducing the peeking stars on incandescent arc Beholden to romantic flame blazing in your eyes, Wooing constellations twinkling in an astral dance Amid outburst of meteor storms, celestial sparks Knowing that is everything you ever asked for From tangerine emotions scripted on lovesick skies, When in embrace of soft twilight, holding my hands, Deep within thoughts, you fondly fancied about What it would be like to hear euphony of affection In eternity of love-song warbling from our hearts, As we take this evening into bosoms of new dawn And kiss the resplendent morn in each other’s arms Living the dream of ruby visions in butterfly nebula Floating in cosmos on coral wingspans of romance. October 17, 2019 Placed 2nd: Living the dream poetry contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier Placed 3rd: Strand select D contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/18/2020 3:47:00 PM
"What it would be like to hear euphony of affection"...wonderfully written :)
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Date: 12/20/2019 11:49:00 PM
I love this poem, with its beautifully vivid imagery and romantic message. The poem itself, is a dream! Congratulations, Vijay!
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Date: 11/15/2019 2:07:00 PM
Very romantic and fully poetic! Congratulations Vijay!
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Date: 11/11/2019 11:04:00 AM
Absolute romance floats from these lines. Congratulations, Vijay!
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Date: 11/11/2019 11:04:00 AM
Absolute romance floats from these lines. Congratulations, Vijay!
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Date: 11/10/2019 8:00:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your top placement on the best 100 poems.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2019 8:16:00 AM
Much appreciate Eve--many thanks for the return visit.
Date: 11/10/2019 12:23:00 PM
You painted romance well here Vijay, fine quill friend;-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2019 5:06:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 11/2/2019 8:06:00 PM
This is about as dreamy as living the dream gets, Vijay! Congrats for your placement.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 8:54:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 10/28/2019 11:42:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Vijay!! Romantic phrasings of such soulful intensity ... an ink serenade expressed w/Bard baritone musing, oh so elegantly beautiful. A poetic masterpiece! Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 8:53:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments Freddie--many thanks.
Date: 10/27/2019 5:28:00 PM
I love your use of vocabulary. It's great to see a plethora of great words in one piece.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 9:31:00 AM
Much appreciate MA--many thanks.
Date: 10/25/2019 4:38:00 PM
Lovely penning Vijay, full of great imagery with much insight to make one ponder. Blessings,Gordon
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2019 8:49:00 AM
Much appreciate Gordon--many thanks.
Date: 10/24/2019 9:08:00 PM
Floating in a dream- and that is where you take me, with your words of love. The beauty in so many magical moments. It is simply breathtaking indeed. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 2:45:00 PM
Much appreciate your wonderful comments my friend--many thanks.
Date: 10/23/2019 11:56:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2019 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 10/23/2019 10:12:00 AM
We have just to open wide our hearts and live the dream you have exquisitely presented for your avid readers to wallow in! A great entry worthy of an outshining win, dear Vijay.. into my fave list for its beauty.. Best regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback, Besma..always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 10/22/2019 8:08:00 PM
Wow this was beautiful Vijay! Amazing!;)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.
Date: 10/22/2019 4:08:00 PM
Your imagery and creative talent once again shines in an absolute gem of a poem my friend - living the dream of ruby visions.............. thru to ............wingspans of romance - such excellent poetry. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 3:24:00 PM
Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.
Date: 10/22/2019 12:09:00 PM
Imagery galore...A painter of words...I can only imagine if your poem came to life...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:53:00 PM
Much appreciate the kind feedback, Arturo--many thanks.
Date: 10/22/2019 11:08:00 AM
You have a way with words, Vijay...so many striking phrase! Indeed, a dreamy romantic offering! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:52:00 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Paul.
Date: 10/22/2019 1:36:00 AM
I am glad you're dreaming rubies, mine is a nightmare of pain.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:52:00 PM
Wishing you the very best, Pashang. Many thanks.
Date: 10/21/2019 8:59:00 AM
Living the dreams of Ruby visions in butterfly nebula... Wow!!! What a great imagery! So beautifully written. Reads like a winner...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2019 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 10/20/2019 2:44:00 PM
You always know how to use the write words to Form the best imagery... Great poem my friend..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2019 2:51:00 PM
Great to hear from you Silent One--much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:50:00 AM
Very beautiful in scope; love the last line, "ruby visions in butterfly nebula Floating in cosmos on coral wingspans of romance."
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate.
Date: 10/19/2019 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful expression Vijay. Lovely imagery. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Date: 10/19/2019 2:48:00 PM
Very vivid imagery in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2019 2:50:00 PM
Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.
Date: 10/18/2019 10:09:00 PM
Fantastic verse, Vijay, great for a win. Hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2019 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your visit and comments--much appreciate.
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