Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Living the Dream

Enamored in adulation of your whispering night
I adore charming moonlit sky, arousing doting vibes,
Seducing the peeking stars on incandescent arc
Beholden to romantic flame blazing in your eyes,

Wooing constellations twinkling in an astral dance
Amid outburst of meteor storms, celestial sparks
Knowing that is everything you ever asked for
From tangerine emotions scripted on lovesick skies,

When in embrace of soft twilight, holding my hands,
Deep within thoughts, you fondly fancied about
What it would be like to hear euphony of affection
In eternity of love-song warbling from our hearts,

As we take this evening into bosoms of new dawn
And kiss the resplendent morn in each other’s arms
Living the dream of ruby visions in butterfly nebula
Floating in cosmos on coral wingspans of romance.

October 17, 2019
Placed 2nd: Living the dream poetry contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Placed 3rd: Strand select D contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree October 18, 2020 at 3:47 PM "What it would be like to hear euphony of affection"...wonderfully written :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 20, 2019 at 11:49 PM I love this poem, with its beautifully vivid imagery and romantic message. The poem itself, is a dream! Congratulations, Vijay!

Smita Kulkarni November 15, 2019 at 2:07 PM Very romantic and fully poetic! Congratulations Vijay!

Eve Roper November 10, 2019 at 8:00 PM Back with congratulations on your top placement on the best 100 poems. Vijay Pandit November 11, 2019 at 8:16 AM Much appreciate Eve--many thanks for the return visit.

Keith O.J. Hunt November 10, 2019 at 12:23 PM You painted romance well here Vijay, fine quill friend;-) Vijay Pandit November 10, 2019 at 5:06 PM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2019 at 8:06 PM This is about as dreamy as living the dream gets, Vijay! Congrats for your placement. Vijay Pandit November 9, 2019 at 8:54 AM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 28, 2019 at 11:42 AM Simply beautiful, Vijay!! Romantic phrasings of such soulful intensity ... an ink serenade expressed w/Bard baritone musing, oh so elegantly beautiful. A poetic masterpiece! Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior Vijay Pandit November 9, 2019 at 8:53 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments Freddie--many thanks.

Midnight Aurora October 27, 2019 at 5:28 PM I love your use of vocabulary. It's great to see a plethora of great words in one piece. Vijay Pandit October 28, 2019 at 9:31 AM Much appreciate MA--many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell October 25, 2019 at 4:38 PM Lovely penning Vijay, full of great imagery with much insight to make one ponder. Blessings,Gordon Vijay Pandit October 27, 2019 at 8:49 AM Much appreciate Gordon--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole October 24, 2019 at 9:08 PM Floating in a dream- and that is where you take me, with your words of love. The beauty in so many magical moments. It is simply breathtaking indeed. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 25, 2019 at 2:45 PM Much appreciate your wonderful comments my friend--many thanks.

Heidi Sands October 23, 2019 at 11:56 PM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit October 24, 2019 at 9:38 AM Thank you Heidi.

Besma Riabi Dziri October 23, 2019 at 10:12 AM We have just to open wide our hearts and live the dream you have exquisitely presented for your avid readers to wallow in! A great entry worthy of an outshining win, dear Vijay.. into my fave list for its beauty.. Best regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit October 23, 2019 at 3:26 PM Thank you for the kind feedback, Besma..always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 8:08 PM Wow this was beautiful Vijay! Amazing!;) Vijay Pandit October 23, 2019 at 3:25 PM Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos October 22, 2019 at 4:08 PM Your imagery and creative talent once again shines in an absolute gem of a poem my friend - living the dream of ruby visions.............. thru to ............wingspans of romance - such excellent poetry. Hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit October 23, 2019 at 3:24 PM Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.

Arturo Michael October 22, 2019 at 12:09 PM Imagery galore...A painter of words...I can only imagine if your poem came to life... Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:53 PM Much appreciate the kind feedback, Arturo--many thanks.

Paul Callus October 22, 2019 at 11:08 AM You have a way with words, Vijay...so many striking phrase! Indeed, a dreamy romantic offering! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:52 PM Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Paul.

Pashang Salehi October 22, 2019 at 1:36 AM I am glad you're dreaming rubies, mine is a nightmare of pain. Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:52 PM Wishing you the very best, Pashang. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan October 21, 2019 at 8:59 AM Living the dreams of Ruby visions in butterfly nebula... Wow!!! What a great imagery! So beautifully written. Reads like a winner... Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:52 PM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Silent One October 20, 2019 at 2:44 PM You always know how to use the write words to Form the best imagery... Great poem my friend.. Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:51 PM Great to hear from you Silent One--much appreciate..many thanks.

M. L. Kiser October 20, 2019 at 11:50 AM Very beautiful in scope; love the last line, "ruby visions in butterfly nebula Floating in cosmos on coral wingspans of romance." Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:51 PM Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Judy Ball October 19, 2019 at 4:27 PM Beautiful expression Vijay. Lovely imagery. Love it. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:51 PM Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Matthew Anish October 19, 2019 at 2:48 PM Very vivid imagery in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:50 PM Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.

Eve Roper October 18, 2019 at 10:09 PM Fantastic verse, Vijay, great for a win. Hugs Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:49 PM Thank you Eve for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands October 18, 2019 at 6:32 PM Wow Vijay! This is so nice! And the line ...In eternity of love-song warbling from our hearts. I love it. Very well written :) Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:49 PM You are so very kind--much appreciate Heidi..many thanks.

Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2019 at 8:16 AM I like how you dream Vijay. ;0) Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:48 PM Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

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