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Living or dying

Is life living or is it dying Yes you are a live but are you living Every hour, every minute and every second you are coming closer to your death It’s a sad thought But than again life is sad (My first poem. Any tips please tell me)

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Karen Croft

Date: 5/17/2024 6:37:00 PM

A very good first poem. It is full of emotion. Poetry is a great expression for your thoughts and feelings. You just let words flow and a poem is formed. Welcome to poetrysoup.

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/17/2024 6:24:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (Keep on writing while studying different types or forms of poetry.)