Living Ocean

Shining through the light on the water gleaming
Golden jewelry sparkles like diamonds cresting
Waves o’er waves of tapestry woven, breathing
Ocean is living
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 4:55 PM
wow, I love this, the way you brought ocean to life!! congrats on your fine win.
Stephens Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Hi, As I live by the sea, I enjoyed reading your vivid words to describe so accurately the living ocean's swells. Congrats xx
A  Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:47 AM
John. Congrats on the win. SKAT LOVE
A   Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Hello John, I love the sparkling imagery:) Congratulations on your awesome win. Love Linda
Carmack Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:49 AM
A well sewed construction. Congrats John.
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