Living My Name

In your presence, I suddenly rediscovered my name

It was hidden under the cloak of foolish pride

A self contained the mirage that dulled my perception of what was real and of truth

My eyes now unveiled of imageries clouded in cancer

As once before, I only saw people as shadows

And their backdrop as nothing but random interludes

Your life size tenderness bleeds unto my unformed consciousness

An arranged feast between a shamed thief and a generous princess

Now painted in vibrant hues is the intensity of our communion

A freed slave, I once before wore over me the a gown clothing my naked anonymity

And in grandeur I now assumed an identity, a pride of place

No longer orphaned in the void that echoed my entrapped soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 4:50 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 6, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Hi, David, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
Ella Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Linda for your encouragement and somewhat resurrecting me from anonymity. I'll certainly put up some works. Thanks Linda again. Warmest regards.
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January 7, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Amazing... SKAT
Moreno Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:25 PM
David, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
Ogunbiyi Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 2:04 PM
so, in your graceful rhythmical verse, you did not mention who did you this much pleasure of enlightmennt
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September 25, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Sheart Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:55 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals David. Love, Carol
Eggins Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 3:01 AM
Congrates on being featured this week ... what a brilliant poem I loved it .. Regards Jayne x x
Ella Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Thanks for all the goodwill everyone - I really feel appreciated and inspired too!!
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 8:09 PM
David congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
Pickett Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Nice....Congrats on your feature write......:JP]
Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:35 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Shahwan Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Beautiful.
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