Living Loveless

A breath escapes this lonely soul
 jilted sigh expels it heavily        falling flat
From on my back I see the stars align 
  ...but only in other skies
        as charcoal cumulous and birds of prey loom in mine
Each stab wound scars and scathes.
   they accumulate-

 
Her indifference kills in it's lack of scorn
   or spite...just apathetic attacks
Unprovoked and careless
Inclinations to instigate strife
....to bring flavorful drama to her life...
and misery to mine


I helplessly fall into these traps
seeking out affection in the dryest wells
hitting bottom and licking the stone
for it's scarcest moisture
Parched and living loveless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hilliker Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 9:04 PM
A sad Free verse. I hope you find what you're looking for.
Tak Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Steve.. I can relate to this! I too have fallen into such traps... but vow to never go through that again! Thanks for the reminder as re-enter the dating world :)
Delacroix Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 8:02 PM
How very sad to have to go through these kinds of pain. Don t let her win by becoming indifferent yourself. It's time to close the door to what cause you pain and find things, even little ones, that make life worthwhile, so that you can first realize you are worthwhile. The poem is very well written and conveys well your feelings. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Culverhouse Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Enjoyed your heartfelt poem, keep sharing.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 8:29 AM
learn how to switch places. be the one going away never to return. find the reasons and explain them to her. convince your self and she'll be back before you know it. and as always this is still the steve i know a poet to his heart. i love it. John Henry Loving III
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