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Living Life In Free Fall

Living life in free fall
looking down far below
praying that someone 
will come along
to save my soul.

Trying to walk on air
grasping at the wind
I fall faster
and faster.
Not knowing when
I will hit the ground
or who will mourn
my demise
and impending
disaster.



Peter Dome.copyright.2014. Jan.
.

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Linda Jackson

January 6, 2014 at 10:09 AM

I love this poem and can sense the free fall vividly. Brilliant. Best wishes, Linda x

Peter Dome

January 6, 2014 at 11:43 AM

Thank you so much Linda. glad you enjoyed it. take good care. my best wishes. Pete.

Debbie Guzzi

January 5, 2014 at 6:34 PM

The last thing in this poem, I feel it too, but we must live for ourselves we will know nothing of who mourns us if any so why worry my friend [I'm talking to myself too!][ What a lovely thing to say to me :) I enjoy writing in Scots & Irish dialect, mostly no one reads it, they must take the time read it aloud, the brogue has such charm & I'm sure I don't 'ave it a' right yet!] Light & Love

Peter Dome

January 5, 2014 at 7:01 PM

So true Debbie, but so sad too. I love your work and the brouge, I can't pretend Robbie's beautiful work and the likes are not always easy to understand., but I think you did. real justice with your excellent write. I also like the fact, you are keeping the dialect alive, and bringing it to a wide audience. to appreciate. such things are part of all of us. Thank you so much take good care. Pete.

Sara Kendrick

January 5, 2014 at 3:56 PM

Well, I hope that there is no disaster but that someone greater than you catches before the landing..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Peter Dome

January 5, 2014 at 4:31 PM

Hi Sara a real pleasure. your work is beautiful. thank you very much. I really appreciate hearing from you. take care best wishes. Pete.

Maggie Mae Mcafee

January 4, 2014 at 11:01 PM

Very impelling! Maggie

Peter Dome

January 5, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Hi Maggie so good to hear from you, thank you so much for your kindness and catching me before I hitting the ground ha ha. take care best wishes. Pete.

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