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Living Life

I hope you have angels  
watching over you. 
Because the way 
you live your life is'
A  CRIME!  




7/7/2013   12noon

Copyright © Debbie Duncan | Year Posted 2013

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August 22, 2013 at 3:23 AM

Goats the angels are taking note, on how yer not acting the goat, if ya act the goat in time, they'll figure out the goat drinks wine, the san-goannas know it, inbreeding suits em fine, to be a goat of a poet, just aint a bloody crime... Don re : "Living life" Debbie Duncan

August 6, 2013 at 12:58 AM

Wow not, to many words but what an impact lol I love your shock factor....it's so cool:0) ty4sharing...one love cheriex

July 13, 2013 at 12:18 PM

OMG...This is just too funny!

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2013 at 1:34 AM

soupmail for ya

Andrea Dietrich

July 12, 2013 at 7:17 PM

debbie, this is a great one liner!!! it's not a limerick but you could call it maybe a grook!!

July 12, 2013 at 9:31 PM

thanks Andrea ;}

July 12, 2013 at 3:44 PM

There are many that live like that ...Enjoyed reading your creative and unique work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

July 11, 2013 at 9:06 PM

I think we all know a person or two like this. Had me smiling with this limerick. love phyl

July 11, 2013 at 8:57 AM

HA! Declare it, Debbie! :) Nice!

July 12, 2013 at 11:32 AM

Hello Drake ;}

July 10, 2013 at 9:26 PM

I have a few people I know I feel this way about!!!!

July 11, 2013 at 12:15 AM

I think we all might Donna ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 10, 2013 at 4:02 PM

- I believe in angels, Debbie. - Well done my friend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

July 10, 2013 at 4:27 PM

Thank you Anne ;}

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