Tim Smith Poet Couplet

Living In Your Dream

Floating across rivers, valleys, and streams

I'm thinking of living inside of your dreams

Run barefoot through nature, you chasing me

End up tripping and falling in love by the sea

We're two eagles that fly, soaring high in the sky 

Let the wind take our bodies, as life passes on by

You're a delicate flower, I'm a young honey bee

Sucking your nectar and starting a new family tree

Sliding down rainbows after a warm springtime mist

Laughter and giggles when on your cheek I plant my kiss

Your dream will not end having me inside you

Our days will get brighter and our night times will too

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Jaycee Cervenka May 20, 2015 at 9:01 PM A lovely romantic write that gives a taste of passion along with a taste of honey. ; -) ~Jan

Dave Timperley May 20, 2015 at 6:56 AM Whoa this is HOT! I love it! God Bless. D.

Cecilia Macfarlane May 16, 2015 at 6:25 PM You Tim know how to dream! Beautiful, fun and romantic! Hugs

Debra Harris May 15, 2015 at 7:22 PM Wow! This poem makes me feel like falling in love!

Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:32 AM truly beautiful pen tim love the imaginary pal

Jack Ellison April 26, 2015 at 8:27 AM Oh you "old" dog, you! All the ladies' hearts must a-beatin' wildly!!!!

Gary Bateman April 25, 2015 at 9:29 PM Hello Tim, I see with your write here that you are still the "Master of Romance." I like this one for sure!! A "7" and a FAV definitely. (I have just started my very slow return to "PS" as I've been away since mid-February as I was finalizing my first book of poetry of publication. My book is now done and was released to the public on 9 April. I'm back now onboard once again with "PS" and look forward to more of your wonderful poetry as ever!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2015 at 1:32 PM - A lovely beautiful, colorful and romantic poem Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nandita Das April 25, 2015 at 12:45 PM Incredibly beautiful......7

Sara Kendrick April 25, 2015 at 12:17 PM Ahhh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading your entrance into your dream lady's dream..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison April 25, 2015 at 11:36 AM lovely images Tim charming and romantic:-) hugs jan xx Tim Smith April 25, 2015 at 11:39 AM Thanks Jan have a great night....Tim

Kp Nunez April 25, 2015 at 11:12 AM NICE! The Romantic Poet keeps on...lovely poem...and kind of sensual...A 7! PS. You may like to spellcheck the line before the last. :) Tim Smith April 25, 2015 at 11:19 AM Thanks Kim I fixed it.

Charmaine Chircop April 25, 2015 at 11:02 AM Now I wanmt to slidw down rainbows and jump on candyfloss clouds.You re an exceptional poet Tim.Extremely Romantic.Another fav Tim Smith April 25, 2015 at 11:20 AM Yes that would be beautiful...maybe after the rain stops here I'll slide down one and get you....hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2015 at 9:49 AM a luscious dream this is, Tim. I loved the part about sliding down the rainbows. Very original image! Tim Smith April 25, 2015 at 11:41 AM Thanks Andrea...that would be most fun