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Living In the Sunshine

My multicolored garden has such a sunny outlook,
Like the fleeing dawn shadows daylight overtook.
Not minding the storms, they drink up the rain,
For veritable growth, often comes with some pain.

Windblown near a rose bush, is my marigold orange,
Contrasting with the scarlet, I'm always adoring!
And in noontide peace, trees seem to be napping,
In graceful emerald beauty, as fervor is sapping.

Lotus lily pond, of the deepest burgundy blooms,
Float softly upon water, trailing fragrant fumes!
Never complaining, always showing its best face,
Is my yellow dahlia, bringing cheer to anyplace!


Written on 3/22/2021
For: Enter the 'ALL YOURS (Mar 23)' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Flowery! Beautiful!
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Thank you so much.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 12:16 PM
I see congratulations are due. You chose flowers with so many varieties of color. A deserving win.
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for your gratifying remarks. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Back with congrats!
Buehler Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 5:18 PM
Evelyn, these are my favourite flowers too, especially my father’s garden had Dahlias - I can never forget their beauty! Marigold, Lotus - Wow! Congratulations on your win with this memorable poem ~ Mala
Buehler Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Thank you for your expressions of congratulations and appreciation, Mala. Your kind words mean so much. :D
Y. Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Hi Evelyn, I just came back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved, my friend. Have a great day and enjoy the sunshine:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:55 AM
That's so nice of you to say, Alexis. I appreciate your warm remarks. I hope yours is a sunny day as well. :D
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 5:49 AM
Ooh that lily pond! I once rode a dugout canoe through a lovely setting of blooms in Panama! Felt like I was in a magazine!
Buehler Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Wow, what an experience! Thank you for your lovely thoughts, which are now fortunately, my thoughts! :D
May Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Beautiful imagery Evelyn, lovely verse..
Buehler Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph.
Y. Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 7:50 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You have transported the reader into such a lovely garden. The flowers have beautiful and vibrant colors . Everything looks amazing; one could just linger there all day. I enjoyed the view. Thanks for penning such a write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis Soupmail
Buehler Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Thank you for your inspiring expressions of appreciation, Alexis. It's so lovely to know that my garden is a place you'd like to linger. Comments like yours make writing so rewarding. Have a great day, my friend. :D
Kauffman Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 11:23 AM
You had me at the first line with your garden's "sunny outlook" - so creative a perception - and the trailing rainbow of color. Congratulations on your win! This is truly a delightful picture and a garden I would like to spend time in on a warm afternoon! Blessings!
Buehler Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 9:12 AM
It is bliss when someone loves something you've created, Sam. Thank you for your wonderful words of appreciation and congratulations. Blessings to you, my friend. :D
Merryman Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Sounds like an amazing garden, Evelyn! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Buehler Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 8:42 AM
It's where the joy is. Thank you very much, Kim. :D
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 4:08 AM
- An encouraging and beautiful poem, Evelyn :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Anne-Lise. hugs :D
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:14 PM
Ah, such beautiful imagery in such a well-crafted poem. Nice work, Evelyn. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Buehler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:26 PM
That is so nice to know, L Milton. Thank you for visiting my garden. :D
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