Living In the Past

Play for me, Long May You Run,
to shed a tear and reminisce
of open roads when life begun,
to think of those now gone and missed.

Play for me a tender song
to share with some good friends like you.
Let's laugh and cry and sing along.
I know you feel the way I do.

Faced with the choice of moving on
or falling in the past's abyss,
I'd rather meet each day's new dawn
with those dear souls I love and miss.

Long may they run, sun-kissed somehow, 
though I have changed so much since then.
I wonder if they'd know me now
and warm me with their love again.


Inspired by Neil Young's Long May You Run, 11/12/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda, well done
Halliday Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Pretty write. Nice sentiments. Pleased to share 1st place with you.
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Quite i nspiring write, congrats on the win
May Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Great write and win Rhonda...congrats
Yvonne Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 7:04 AM
You did so well with this Rhonda, not as well as your son but you did mahvelous!!!! I heard from well I guess him that he is the better poet. Wonderful as always Rhonda, love it, love you, Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 1:38 AM
a lovely inspiring write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan x
Kayode Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Congrats on the win with this thrilling Poem Rhonda,today we shall rock and roll...huggs
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:57 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your first place win
Deschler Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:29 PM
I was deeply moved by your poem, especially that last beautiful stanza... Congratulations on your first place win, Rhonda!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:52 AM
we all live there at times rhonda deep touching bless you very beautifully penned piece
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 1:55 AM
Well written piece you've created here Rhonda! Enjoyed reading it! Love and hugs! xxx D.
Martin Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 9:50 PM
I believe I may have discovered another "real" poet around here. I've always loved that song by Young (Long May You Run) and this poem helps me (and others) re-connect and re-affirm my belief that all things truly are connected. Thank you, Terry
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:00 PM
This really touches me. You are very talented.
Onclaud Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:57 AM
warming my spirit through your radiant piece, Rhonda.. beautiful!... huggs
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:58 AM
Love this write inspired by Neil Young.
Neels Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Rhonda, what a beauty.. I especially love the last stanza..
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