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Living In the Past

Play for me, Long May You Run, to shed a tear and reminisce of open roads when life begun, to think of those now gone and missed. Play for me a tender song to share with some good friends like you. Let's laugh and cry and sing along. I know you feel the way I do. Faced with the choice of moving on or falling in the past's abyss, I'd rather meet each day's new dawn with those dear souls I love and miss. Long may they run, sun-kissed somehow, though I have changed so much since then. I wonder if they'd know me now and warm me with their love again. Inspired by Neil Young's Long May You Run, 11/12/2014

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Date: 12/11/2014 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda, well done
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:37:00 AM
Pretty write. Nice sentiments. Pleased to share 1st place with you.
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:29:00 AM
Quite i nspiring write, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:18:00 AM
Great write and win Rhonda...congrats
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:04:00 AM
You did so well with this Rhonda, not as well as your son but you did mahvelous!!!! I heard from well I guess him that he is the better poet. Wonderful as always Rhonda, love it, love you, Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:38:00 AM
a lovely inspiring write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:36:00 PM
Congrats on the win with this thrilling Poem Rhonda,today we shall rock and roll...huggs
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:57:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your first place win
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:29:00 PM
I was deeply moved by your poem, especially that last beautiful stanza... Congratulations on your first place win, Rhonda!
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:52:00 AM
we all live there at times rhonda deep touching bless you very beautifully penned piece
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:55:00 AM
Well written piece you've created here Rhonda! Enjoyed reading it! Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:50:00 PM
I believe I may have discovered another "real" poet around here. I've always loved that song by Young (Long May You Run) and this poem helps me (and others) re-connect and re-affirm my belief that all things truly are connected. Thank you, Terry
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:00:00 PM
This really touches me. You are very talented.
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Date: 11/12/2014 6:57:00 AM
warming my spirit through your radiant piece, Rhonda.. beautiful!... huggs
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:58:00 AM
Love this write inspired by Neil Young.
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:31:00 AM
Rhonda, what a beauty.. I especially love the last stanza..
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