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Living In Limbo Song

When we were young Together we both followed the sun I saw forever in you'r eyes Made for each other With so much to discover A dream we thought would never dye. Time took it's toll As we grew older Others tried to tear us apart The fire we once had Became just a smoulder We became strangers of the heart. chorus. Where did our yesterday's go Why did it have to end Teenage sweethearts Who followed the sun As both lovers and best friends. Too many things stood in our way It was like climbing a mountain everyday Although our love may have died I still feel the pain deep inside. Everything around me reminds me Of her and haunting memories of loss Still plague my mind When you lose everything you had Life becomes an existence You live in limbo And life is so unkind. As I get older Life becomes colder And the sun no longer shines Sometimes I can't bare anymore I feel as I'm out of my mind Chorus. Peter Dome. Coyright.2016. Dec.

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Date: 12/8/2016 7:41:00 AM
Hi Peter, I really enjoyed the " realness " of these lyrics.You caputured of someone's life in limbo very well. I enjoyed this song my friend: -) Alexis PS, It's good to see you posting again.
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/8/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis, I'm a bt rusty but glad you liked it. Hoe you are ok my friend.Take care. Pete.
Date: 12/5/2016 2:21:00 PM
- The flames are perhaps less ... but there are still feelings and warmth from your words - A wonderful poem, Peter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2016 1:07:00 AM
Hi my friend. Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it. Hope you are keeping ok. My best wishes. Pete.

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