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Living In Dark Days

May half of your heart be shattered May some of your times be gone May love of your life leave you too soon But fate keeps knitting you another stories to go There was creed slipped among your tears Give a little bit sparkle within your weary eyes You try to seek this true light It hid behind your timid side Still in the same dimension you speak your lonesome The other fingers already steal your mess Tried to be the first stone of your wall If only you let them in and be the part of it Baring the dark days Parts of your past had been stoned You seek the twinkle which placed under the skies And try to find the answer through the gust of wind Maybe all that you need is to be solid Or maybe you perched on a wrong book As you wish life is to be perfect But the fact a perfection never been too flawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/21/2014 7:02:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 3/22/2014 9:05:00 PM
What a treat to have a new poem to read. Outstanding! Dark and delicious like chocolate. Expressed as only you can. I have missed your visits and your writing. Hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/22/2014 11:59:00 PM
Thank you Rick, have been missing you too :D, glad that you like the poem :) hug, Yanny
Date: 3/21/2014 1:00:00 AM
Yanny, beautifully written... Verlena
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/21/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Verlena, glad that you enjoyed it :) wishing you a great day there, hug, yanny
Date: 3/19/2014 8:02:00 AM
- Nothing is flawless dear friend, Yanny !! - A touching and well written poem. - (I still wait .... the time is approaching .... hope you send me some words when the "miracle" comes. --- Good luck!) - Have a happy day. - Nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/20/2014 4:59:00 AM
It's a boy Anne :D, thank youuu
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/19/2014 8:49:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS AS A MOTHER!! - CONGRATULATIONS    BABY! - Welcome to the World! (Boy or Girl?) - All is well with mother and child? <3 <3 <3
Date: 3/7/2014 5:46:00 PM
You are most welcome!! :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 3:38:00 PM
Good writing.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/7/2014 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Yaa-Owusua Addo, pleasure to have a visit by you :), hug, Yanny

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