Living In Dark Days

May half of your heart be shattered
May some of your times be gone
May love of your life leave you too soon
But fate keeps knitting you another stories to go

There was creed slipped among your tears
Give a little bit sparkle within your weary eyes
You try to seek this true light
It hid behind your timid side

Still in the same dimension you speak your lonesome
The other fingers already steal your mess
Tried to be the first stone of your wall
If only you let them in and be the part of it

Baring the dark days
Parts of your past had been stoned
You seek the twinkle which placed under the skies
And try to find the answer through the gust of wind

Maybe all that you need is to be solid
Or maybe you perched on a wrong book
As you wish life is to be perfect
But the fact a perfection never been too flawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Akter  Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Nice
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 9:05 PM
What a treat to have a new poem to read. Outstanding! Dark and delicious like chocolate. Expressed as only you can. I have missed your visits and your writing. Hugs Rick
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March 22, 2014 at 11:59 PM
Thank you Rick, have been missing you too :D, glad that you like the poem :) hug, Yanny
Walker  Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 1:00 AM
Yanny, beautifully written... Verlena
Widjanarko Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Thank you Verlena, glad that you enjoyed it :) wishing you a great day there, hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:02 AM
- Nothing is flawless dear friend, Yanny !! - A touching and well written poem. - (I still wait .... the time is approaching .... hope you send me some words when the "miracle" comes. --- Good luck!) - Have a happy day. - Nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 4:59 AM
It's a boy Anne :D, thank youuu
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:49 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS AS A MOTHER!! - CONGRATULATIONS    BABY! - Welcome to the World! (Boy or Girl?) - All is well with mother and child? <3 <3 <3
Addo Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:46 PM
You are most welcome!! :)
Addo Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Good writing.
Widjanarko Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Thank you Yaa-Owusua Addo, pleasure to have a visit by you :), hug, Yanny
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