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Living In a Dream World

you were there
and so was i
you in youre world and me in mine
yet somehow we werent there at all
and our worlds were just to small
together we would unite
leaving our old worlds behind
creating a new worlds together
one that we would share forever and ever
now here we are
as we have and always will be
in a world that we created
for only you and me
no longer in our own worlds 
but in our dream world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/7/2013 7:02:00 PM
Nice and with a positive ending... You write very well and I expect to read more of your posts...... Jake
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Stacy Wampler
Date: 4/7/2013 7:14:00 PM
Ty someone has come into my life that has inspired me to write again haven't done it in a very long time
Date: 4/5/2013 8:24:00 AM
This is beautifully written!!! :)
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Stacy Wampler
Date: 4/5/2013 8:34:00 AM
ty!!! <3

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