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Living Heroes

Depiction of the green surface I see the diamonds However, taken aback by the stench of death. I am living today, so death does not succumb the stupidity of horror In our world. Why? Can we not see life. A raining shower A chord in E major Strumming to the rain of the umbrella A large mansion, all alone I create a friend. Instead of the stench A living hero.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 11:33:00 PM
Deep and sublime in great freeverse style. The wording is intense and poetic. Kudos for this great muse. I ESP like, 'chord in e major' . Great to read from u again.
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Moses Samandar
Date: 1/21/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/25/2016 8:37:00 PM
wow, this is very direct and an easy read write Moses, well done
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Moses Samandar
Date: 8/25/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Lewis. Your comment means a lot.

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