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Living Darkness

The only thing I see tonight Is the sun blocked out by the moon What a lovely blinding sight Until the lights anew

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Briana Lynn Minard-Adler

Date: 8/26/2011 10:23:00 PM

Baby you're so sweet, I love any poem by you, dad, and mom.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2010 6:06:00 PM

Welcome to the Soup, young Prince! I see it runs in the "blood"! Good job! Peace, Audrey

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/29/2009 12:12:00 PM

Good visuals in this one little man.... The youngest Pickett strikes again..... Another instant classic bruhah.....it is time for the Pickett prince's to overthrow the king........DAD...hehe... :JP]

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/28/2009 10:44:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Joshua. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/26/2009 1:14:00 PM

This is a beauty Joshua! Hey it took me awhile but I just realized by the comments that Mary is your Mom! Is that right? hey that's no fair! Entirely too much talent in one family, Joshua! :) God bless the whole lot of you,.but looks as though He already has.:) Robert

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/25/2009 8:14:00 PM

WOW.... Well done Son,,,You have th e vision.....Dad

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/25/2009 7:43:00 PM

Another great write son! Excellent visual imagery conveyed here. Keep letting your light shine forth. Love~Mom

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/25/2009 7:38:00 PM

Wonderful visual Joshua .. nice words to create a picture in the mind of the reader... blessings... luv.. happy holidays... Linda-Marie