Living Darkness

The only thing I see tonight
Is the sun blocked out by the moon
What a lovely blinding sight
Until the lights anew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Minard-Adler Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Baby you're so sweet, I love any poem by you, dad, and mom.
Haick Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Welcome to the Soup, young Prince! I see it runs in the "blood"! Good job! Peace, Audrey
Pickett Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Good visuals in this one little man.... The youngest Pickett strikes again..... Another instant classic bruhah.....it is time for the Pickett prince's to overthrow the king........DAD...hehe... :JP]
Brown Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 10:44 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Joshua. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 1:14 PM
This is a beauty Joshua! Hey it took me awhile but I just realized by the comments that Mary is your Mom! Is that right? hey that's no fair! Entirely too much talent in one family, Joshua! :) God bless the whole lot of you,.but looks as though He already has.:) Robert
Pickett Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 8:14 PM
WOW.... Well done Son,,,You have th e vision.....Dad
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 7:43 PM
Another great write son! Excellent visual imagery conveyed here. Keep letting your light shine forth. Love~Mom
Sweetheart Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 7:38 PM
Wonderful visual Joshua .. nice words to create a picture in the mind of the reader... blessings... luv.. happy holidays... Linda-Marie
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