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Living a Lie

It's been one of those weeks I feel rather down and meek I miss seeing your smile and red cheeks honestly, I'm so sad, I feel like a freak I haven't been motivated my feelings aren't liberated My wins aren't celebrated My mind has deviated I wonder why it makes me cry Hoping that the truth is a lie I was not the right kind of guy and, maybe that is the real reason why

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2021 6:33:00 AM

We can never work on a person other than ourselves. If you are seeing that you have faults then you can work on that and become a better person. When one admits that they have a fault/faults then they can go from that point to becoming a better person. I enjoyed reading your very honest work. Sara

Jazzlee Clark
Date: 8/31/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank you so much. Your kind words really means a lot.

Doina Tanasoiu

Date: 8/17/2021 10:37:00 AM

such a nice poem

Jazzlee Clark
Date: 8/31/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thank you so much. Your comment really is appreciated.

Goodwill Stoffels

Date: 8/16/2021 10:42:00 PM

This amazing work from you Son.Very well done.???.

Jazzlee Clark
Date: 8/17/2021 1:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, I really appreciate the kind words, it really means a lot to me.

Lunita Blanca

Date: 8/15/2021 8:20:00 AM

Very good Jazzlee, Togethernes is wonderful, if you have learned when to leave the other alone.

Jazzlee Clark
Date: 8/15/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for those kind words. it really means a lot. You are right, one should know when it is no longer their time in someone else's life