Live Your Best Life

She picked up the pen and smiled at his name.
He was more alive now in some ways than he had been
When he was alive.

The frayed tablecloth was a reminder of his mother.
She had loved her also, because she was the woman
who had raised him.

The pen had his motto “live your best life”.
She loved this reminder 
of the man she had loved most of her life.

She wrote fast and hard; 
the words came for two hours.
Their love story. It was two a.m. 

She flipped off his pretty green desk lamp
and laid her head down on one of his books.
It still had a bit of Old Spice on it.

Written 7-9-2020
Contest: The Old Scribe
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Your muse is not only a touching tale of tender emotions but an inspiration to live with courage, kindness and grace. Congratulations on your win Caren :) Much love!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Thank you Aditi. Much love back!
Kauffman Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 8:22 PM
So tender, Caren, especially the last line. There is a wonderful emotional connection through the scent of Old Spice. Congratulations on your winning placement!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Thank you for stopping by Sam.
Agustin Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so nostalgic. God bless you.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Thank you Beata
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 10:57 PM
I really like this write. It's so evocative of his life --- and of her personality and character too. I think it's a gem, Caren. Thanks, gw
Krutsinger Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 1:32 AM
Thank you Gershon. I liked it too.
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