Live Hard Die Young

Live hard and die young has gone awry
I lived hard but not enough to die
Aches and sprains
Arthritis pain
Live hard and die hard seems to apply!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Moe time to write more limericks for you, Pat. Well done.
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 4:10 PM
That's a good point Line! At least I'm on the right side of the grass!!........80).....pat
Hoffman Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 7:44 PM
I know; its like were turning into the tin man from the Wizard of Oz!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 7:55 PM
I know right?!! Kind of a catch 22 that the only way to live longer is to get older!...................80)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Lol ...ah you da best! :) xomo!
Adams Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 7:35 PM
Aw.....That's very sweet. Thanks Mo.......80)
Flats Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Wit 'n wisdom for sure!
Adams Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 7:35 PM
Thanks John..........80)
Cozart Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 8:15 AM
I know! What's up with that? Good write.
Adams Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thanks Dale...........80)
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