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Little Ticked Boxes

little boxes ticked
delete button selected
memories erased

the good and the bad
no longer retrievable
new memories made

forgive and forget
no words left to remind me
will my heart forget?

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nance Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 6:08 PM
I've deleted so much, erased big chunks of me, often times on the verge of purging everything and everyone. It is the chance to make a change and to make the new memories good is what keeps us going. Hugsx
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Of all the people I know, I can safely say this, toss all the philosophy and words out the window, if one reaches out and hugs, you'd be amazed the bridges mended, Eileen's poetry exemplifies the love and the need for love to me, we can learn so much by reading her words. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:53 AM
I don't think the heart forgets, it may pile on other thoughts to mute some of the feelings that seem to hard to bear.
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:36 AM
There are some things that are hard to read...they remind you of a specific instance or misunderstanding. How much better just to remove that offensive write. I'm doing spring cleaning of my inbox here. Hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Excellent and very deep write my friend. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Thanks ever so much, Ravi. I'm glad you took the time to read this little write. I'll be by to visit you soon.
Roper Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 7:48 PM
This verse is wonderfully done, I wish it was that easy to erase all ill feelings ; Hugs Eve
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:37 AM
I wish so too, Eve. Thank you, dear for your kind visit. Hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 5:54 PM
i believe as life moves forward we tick many boxes eileen excellent pen as always pal i pray you have a blessed day
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Yes, dear....Life is an ongoing process of learning. Thanks for visiting me today. Hugs :)
Ogundare Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 5:06 PM
We learn from what the past has thought us...even though at times we wish we could erase...lovely message.
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Yes, sometimes we don't want to learn the lesson. Thank you for your visit to my work.
Chircop Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:50 PM
The bad memories will be looked at in the future as a chapter that is in the past..because time is a healer,but the beautiful ones..no matter how many years pass by will always be there to remind us...there is beauty in this world..and we were lucky to live it..in special moments..A gteat poemmmBig hugs sweet one.
Manassian Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Thanks, Charmaine. :) I've cleaned out my inbox. Just clicking on all those boxes and seeing titles reminded me of some of the past issues here. Misunderstandings invariably will occur, but when one's character is maligned...it leaves a lasting scar. I'm thankful that I have so many wonderful things to remember as well. You are a bright spot...always have been...always will be. Meeting you will forever live in my heart. I do love you...dearly. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Oh My does this mean we can fill up your inbox with beautiful words and poems!!!! :) hugs! I loved this poem by the way!
Manassian Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 5:00 PM
HA HA HA HA HA!!! You can...and welcome! :) Hugs, Arthur...you always have a way to make me happy.
Smith Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Many times we want to erase it all but we need to learn from the past... lovely post Eileen
Manassian Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:22 PM
I'm clearing out my inbox, Tim. Every now and then a spring clean is needed. Unfortunately, I was reminded of some of the hurtful issues that went on here....some blogs....some nasty emails. Sometimes it isn't easy to forget. With everything gone...at least I will not be tempted to go back and read those mean words. Thanks for reading this one. It's actually a true to life poem. :) Hugs
Callus Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 3:55 PM
I wish it were as easy as ticking and deleting, Eileen! Computers we are not, and coming to terms with certain things is never going to be plain sailing! Hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Yes, dear...You are right. We learn from our mistakes....at least we hope to learn from them. I am not one to easily forget, unfortunately. Forgive I may....forget...is an impossibility. Scientifically speaking, the mind remembers those things which are the most painful or joyful. I'm glad my Malta trip is safe in my mind's storage room! :) Meeting you was definitely a highlight. Hugs, dear.
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 3:53 PM
So deep Eileen - I hope it doesn't relate to any of your poems:-( hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Not at present, though I have deleted some poems in the past. Never again. I'm proud of my work. :) Don't worry, dear. I'm well....I'm just cleaning out my inbox and some painful memories came up. Misunderstandings will always cause strife, I guess. I'm learning to keep more to myself. Atr least I'm trying to stay away from the blogs! ;) Anyway....No worries. :) Hugs
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